Assignment 22A –
Elevator Pitch 3
Reflection from No. 2: I thought a pickup
and delivery option would be a good idea, but this would have to be limited to
a reasonable local range, as it might be more expensive than mailing it. I would disagree with the fact that I’m going
for college students, I believe this service is priced above their budget.
What I changed: I added a delivery option if the client is within a close range. I also made sure to maximize the space around me during the pitch. I found it was much easier to remember the entire pitch too. I was much more comfortable with it, and was able to say it more naturally, and overall, I think this was the best one yet.
What I changed: I added a delivery option if the client is within a close range. I also made sure to maximize the space around me during the pitch. I found it was much easier to remember the entire pitch too. I was much more comfortable with it, and was able to say it more naturally, and overall, I think this was the best one yet.
Hi Ulysses. Nice job on this week’s pitch. The viewer gets what the service is as well as the approximate costs so they know very quickly whether or not this will be a feasible option for them. Nice job on speaking, hand gestures, and overall delivery.
ReplyDeleteYou might think about throwing in some uses for the customer. Maybe someone is looking for custom music for their podcast, or perhaps a church is looking for music for their Easter drama. I think these are a few examples of showing normal people how Hyperspeed can meet their needs.